Tuesday, April 2, 2013

under my skin




Pull my hair & rip my clothes
I am passion burning through my seams
calm my fire, grab some water
watch me steam as I smother with wonder.





5 comments:

  1. "watch me steam as I smother with wonder"
    that is by far one of the best lines i have ever read. It makes me smile. Awesome!

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  2. Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I'm glad I could make you smile too!

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  3. "...wind chasing me through the forest." I love it. Great job on blogging, and I'm glad I could help introduce you to it.

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  4. 'I'll pull my hair & rip my clothes
    I am passion burning through my seams
    calm my fire, grab some water
    watch me steam as I smother with wonder.'

    The last stanza stood out to me. Don't stop! Keep posting :D

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